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Spider Riders (until a new name is chosen)
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A book by me and JeffCon.

 

Prologue

Sato was the Revolutionaries' greatest weapon. He was genetically engineered to be perfect. He was made to succeed. He was the smartest, strongest, fastest man on Terra Nova. Today was the day he proved it. Looking around, he noticed the poorly covered tracks of a ATV.

 Following their crudely-and obviously- cut path through the jungle, he stopped. Looking up, he checked for any sentries that could be dangling from the cavetop above. He smirked, then frowned. Why did his "superiours" choose such a lowly enemy initialization test? The retreating army hadn't even posted fallback sentries for him to avoid. Hearing a faint scuttling he checked above again. Had he missed anything? Impossible. About to restart following the poorly covered tracks he heard it agian. straight overhead was the true enemy, one slightly closer to his caliber than most humans. A Spider Rider. 

How could such a primitive culture produce such an efficient warrior? Of course, even they could never rival him. Glancing down, he pretended not to notice the hulking shape above him. He quietly slipped his hand into his back pocket, and pulled out a long, silver blade. Suddenly he flipped onto a higher branch and swung the blade into the area the spider rider had just been. Thankfully, his opponent was slightly smarter than the average human slug. There was no use pretending he didn't notice the Rider anymore. He dropped back down from the branch and continued on his way.

Spiders, although stealthy on the roof of the caverns, could never stay silent on the ground below. Their greatest advantage was firing their longbows at the enemy from above. 



-- Edited by Kyle on Saturday 29th of October 2011 08:54:18 PM

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...Well this is intense. O.o

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Kyle I have some more written on your whiteboard, review it and send it back if it needs reworking

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Blegh. That's all I have to say.

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