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Topic: The Poems.

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Which one was your favorite? [8 vote(s)]

Whose Blood is This
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Nothing
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Pressure
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Sparrow
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Last year, I went through this weird phase where I wrote all of these creepyish poems... So I'll post some of them here, if thats OK :D

 

WHOSE BLOOD IS THIS

Whose blood is this?

Whose blood fills

the blackened pail

through wind and

hail

whose blood is this?

 

Whos blood is this?

the crow's perhaps

the raven sought out

and killed him last

whose blood is this?

 

whose blood is this?

the raven's blood?

the raven's life drained

into the pail and the mud,

whose blood is this?

 

whose blood is this?

the blood is yours

the raven has claimed

and he still drinks more

the blood is yours

 

 

NOTHING

Nothing hurts

nothing scratches

nothing tears

nothing lashes

nothing will ever

set me free

nothing gives pain

nothings misery

 

nothing is what

brought me here

nothing is

something no one

should fear

something is gone

nothing is hear

something has left

nothing is feared

 

nothing is dead

yet nothing lives on

nothing is something

inside of my head

 

 

PRESSURE

The pressure of life

like a hammer and nail

pressing the minds

into a will that won't fail

 

the sorrowful trials

like a bird song

the melody changes

the trials are gone

 

the pain of the grave

the very last second

the music has stopped

the body is present

 

(AND THE LAST ONE)

 

SPARROW

one small sparrow

hanging from a tree

if nobody knows

did anyone see?

 

did anyone see?

does anyone know?

about the tree

and the tiny sparrow?



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"Sticks and Stones will Break my Bones, but Even Through Death I will Withstand the Pain."

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that was dark. but besides that, your pretty good at this. have you written any other poems?

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i am a greatful grapefruit!

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Thanks a bunch!! My other poems I've written.... well, to put it simply.... They suck -derp- lols..

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Heres one to kinda....lightn...the mood

The being me tree

who sits with me in the being me tree?

to endure all the sorrows 

life throws upon me.

Who sits with me in the being me tree?

to hold my hand

and make me feel free

Who sits with me in the being me tree?

to kiss me and hug me

And let me  be me.

Who sits with me in the being me tree?

to make me so happy

when all else will flee.

P.S. who is claw dark poet?



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cuz I longboard, surf, and play the tuba THATS WHY!!!

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Aww I like it, zzyxzx! XD
Claw Dark Poet? ...what...?

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nice poems you guys

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same basic...stuff... yeah...



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cuz I longboard, surf, and play the tuba THATS WHY!!!

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Yep.. Pretty much.. >.> -derp-

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you should post more stuff.

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I would if I had more.. Well, actually, I'm still trying to find time to work on 48, and so far, it's coming along pretty well.. I've got 3 chapters pretty much done. :D

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I didn't know you still got on here. Nice poems, though.

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Meh, I get on sometimes. Thanks, btw.

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