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Let's get some Role Playing started, eh? For those of you who have never played a forum role playing game before, I'm sure you'll catch on quick. In this thread, use the template provided to create your character. In the main thread, act as your character and move through the story, interacting with other characters and the Storyteller. As the ST, I'll be controlling the world and the NPCs. Other people are welcome to start their own RP Threads as well, but you might want to play in mine for a while and get used to things. In my game, as you play you level up and gain new abilities, so playing often is worth it! Once you're playing, try and post in the Main Thread at least once a day so as not to hold up the story. If you're taking too long to post and holding up all of the other players, I'll take control of your character for that day to move things along. If you go several weeks without acting, then baaaad things will happen to your character. Anyway, let's start!

Future Imperfect
The year is 2083. In 2024, through the flaws of the US Governmental system, a robot was elected president. Through abuse of his power, Robama managed to take over the United States, turning it into a robot utopia. Humans were hunted down and killed. Many stood against the robot menace, but none prevailed. The only survivors were those who hid in a network of underground tunnels, known as The Complex. Located just outside New York, it housed thousand people in Wards of two thousand each. Those inside thought to wait out until a peaceful solution was found. However, all these years later, it is still unsafe to go out. But when The Complex begins to run out of food, their options begin to run out. The Complex Council decides to send a group comprised of one person from each Ward to go out into the ravaged world, to the city of New York, where the will be able to find supplies to bring back. They will have to brave the dangers of the outside world: twisted cyborgs, mutants, psycho maniacs (for some reason, they tend to stick around even when most of man-kind has died off,) and of course, human-hating robots. Each player will be the hero from his or her Ward.

Template for Character Submission:
First Name:
Last Name:
Gender:
Age:
Appearance: (You may post a picture or simply describe yourself. I imagine most people will be doing the later, but you can upload a picture later if you'd like.)
Gun Choice: (Shotgun, sniper, assault rifles, pistol, or large weapons. Your choice determines your main proficiency, meaning the weapon you have been trained with and begin with, although you may of course use any type of weapon. "Large weapons" means grenade launchers, rocket launchers, mini-guns, etc., which are powerful but heavy and difficult to come across. All characters start with a standard hand-gun as well. The pistol proficiency includes magnums. If you'd like a type not on my list, it's probably acceptable, just PM me or post about it. I don't know much about guns, so if anyone wants to expand the list, that's fine.)
Melee Weapon: (Knife, blunt weapons, large bladed weapons, or fists. "Fists" consists of unarmed combat as well as weapons meant to enhance it (brass knuckles, etc.) Everything that applies with guns applies here as well.)
Ability: (Due to the toxic chemicals that have been released by the robots, there is a lot of mutagen in the air. Most of it has been avoided by those in The Complex, but some have gained abilities from it. Choose anything within reason, and I'll tell if you it's alright. It probably will be, unless it's game-breakingly powerful.)
Gun Ability:
Melee Ability:
Special Ability:
(Distribute five points through these categories. You gain an additional two points every level up.)
Non-Combat Abilities:
(These help flesh your your character's personality a little, and should enhance role-playing, giving you an alternative to fighting if you so desire. You have five points to distribute. You do NOT gain non-combat ability points on level up, so choose wisely.)
Medicine (First Aid ability, using herbs, pills and drugs, etc.)
Computer Skills (Hacking, basically; this includes robots, but only an extent, as most have protection against this kind of thing.)
Stealth (Sneaking, stealing, pick-pocketing, etc.)
Speech (Diplomacy, persuasiveness)
Mechanics (Repair of guns and armor, and physical non-computer machinery.)

Character Misc Info: (Talk about your character's personality, background, etc. here.)

Once we get at least one but preferably two or three players, we can begin. Others can join later, though; some people who were not in the Complex have survived, and they are welcome to join the party. If there are any questions, feel free to ask.

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First Name: Jenny
Last Name: Ukar
Gender: Female
Age: 17
Appearance: Black hair, glasses, tall, slim build, pale skin.
Gun choice: Jenny was trained to begin with, and prefers a pistol, usually small enough to fit in her pocket.
melee weapon: Two short knifes.
Gun ability: Good aim.
Melee ability: She prefers a gun, but she is decent with her knifes.
special ability: She is super smart with technology. Smarter than most people.
Non combat abilities: speech, computer skills.
misc. info: She was an orphan who was adopted by a nice family. Before she goes out of the vault, she learns that her parents went out there too. She vows that she will find them. She is mostly a tomboy, but can convince guys otherwise.



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POINT DISTRIBUTION FAILURE. PLEASE REINPUT YOUR ENTRY AND TRY AGAIN.

Like so (this isn't my character; I don't have a character because I'm the story teller. This is an example:)

First Name: Kiyoshi
Last Name: Takaoka
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Appearance: White teen, medium length blond hair(sometimes messy, sometimes clean depending on his mood) A little short for his age, and always seems to have a quiet look on his face. Likes darker clothing.

Gun Choice: Sniper Rifle (With high-powered scope)
Melee Weapon: Carries a Knife, but rarely uses it.
Ability: Has somewhat of a "sixth sense" and increased reasoning skills. Able to sense far away dangers and quickly think of a tactical solution to stop them.

Gun Ability:2
Melee Ability:1
Special Ability:2

Medicine: 0
Computer Skills: 1
Stealth: 3
Speech: 1
Mechanics: 0

Character Misc Info: Usually keeps his personal life to himself. Doesn't like close combat very much, and picks off enemies quickly without a second opinion, and it is unknown whether he gets a thrill out of it. Seems to be calm and quiet mostly, but in fact he is always alert.

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First Name: Jenny
Last Name: Ukar
Gender: Female
Age: 17
Appearance: Black hair, glasses, tall, slim build, pale skin.
Gun choice: Jenny was trained to begin with, and prefers a pistol, usually small enough to fit in her pocket.
melee weapon: Two short knifes.

Gun ability:3
Melee ability:2
special ability:0

Non combat abilities:
Speech:2
Computer skills:3
Medicine:0
Stealth:0
Mechanics:0

misc. info: She was an orphan who was adopted by a nice family. Before she goes out of the vault, she learns that her parents went out there too. She vows that she will find them. She is mostly a tomboy, but can convince guys otherwise.

Like that?


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Almost. You need a special skill.

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First Name: Jenny
Last Name: Ukar
Gender: Female
Age: 17
Appearance: Black hair, glasses, tall, slim build, pale skin.
Gun choice: Jenny was trained to begin with, and prefers a pistol, usually small enough to fit in her pocket.
melee weapon: Two short knifes.
Ability: Jenny can read minds. This is limited, and only works on humans.

Gun ability:3
Melee ability:0
special ability:2

Non combat abilities:
Speech:2
Computer skills:3
Medicine:0
Stealth:0
Mechanics:0

misc. info: She was an orphan who was adopted by a nice family. Before she goes out of the vault, she learns that her parents went out there too. She vows that she will find them. She is mostly a tomboy, but can convince guys otherwise.


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There ya go; perfect. Now we just hopefully can get another player or two and then we can begin.

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*Sigh*

Looks like no one's really into FRPGs around here.

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I AM! I hope R signs up. He could do good things.

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Shantz says he's gonna sign up. w00t.gif

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First Name: Dawn
Last Name: summers
Gender: Female
Age: 16
Appearance: she is pretty has reddish brown hair she is 5'7 so pretty average she is skinny height she has silver-gray eyes.
Gun Choice:Just plain old Pistol
Melee Weapon: knife/ dagger
Ability: control animals
Gun Ability: 1
Melee Ability:2
Special Ability:2
Non-Combat Abilities:
Medicine 2
Computer Skills
Stealth 3
Speech
Mechanics

Character Misc Info: (Talk about your character's personality, background, etc. here.) She is usually quiet, smart, she is brave, tough and can give you glares like none other. she is wary of most things and loves getting her share of the fight. she hates all that girly- goody goody stuff. She is all Tomboy. her parents were killed by robots and she was living on the streets of the complex until she was found by her uncle. and has been living with her uncle since.

I guess you could call this an anime pic of dawn but barely. I mean 1. she wouldn't be wearing a skirt and 2 her hair isn't that long! but it is pretty much the same color.
Michelle.jpg

-- Edited by hafenater on Monday 16th of August 2010 01:48:25 PM

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There! Another person w00t.gifCan we start now, Ben?

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DawnHere is a little bit better picture of Dawn except that her hair would be longer.

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Hmm, I'm kinda hoping for another player, but if no one joins the the next day or so, then we'll go ahead and start.

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First Name: Brock
Last Name: Henderson
Gender: Male
Age: 18
Appearance: Buff, Brown spiked hair tall
GunChoice:159162756.jpg
"Designed for use against live targets, including targets protected with body armor, and unarmored vehicles (cars. trucks, etc.)"
Melee Weapon: Sword strapped to his side
Ability: Extreme buffness (Super Strength)
Gun Ability:2
Melee Ability:1
Special Ability:2
Non-Combat Abilities
Medicine 2
Computer Skills
Stealth
Speech
Mechanics 3


Character
Misc Info: He trains all day shooting targets and working out. Nice, DEVILISHELY HANDSOME, SINGLE.


-- Edited by Sam on Tuesday 17th of August 2010 06:50:34 PM

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can i possibly join?

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First name: Shane
Last name: Davids
Gender: Male
Age: 18
Appearance: Tall, Goth, wears black all the time.
Gun Choice: Armalite AR 50 (high powered sniper rifle.)
Melee weapon: Ka-bar knife
Special Ability: Invisibility at will
Gun Skill: 1
Melee skill: 2
Special Ability: 3
Non combat abilities:
medicine 0
computer skills 0
stealth 5
speech 0
mechanics 0

-- Edited by j on Friday 3rd of September 2010 06:40:26 PM

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I am going to make a 2nd person but if you don't want me too then I wont rp him.

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First Name: Dusk
Last Name: Griffin
Gender: M
Age: 16 we think
Appearance: 6 ft. so pretty tall shaggy dark brown hair, usually wears jeans and a raggy t shirt,
Gun Choice: SHotgun
Melee Weapon: knife strapped to boot and shortsword strapped to his back
Ability: fades into shadows, like almost disappears when in a shadow,
Gun Ability:2
Melee Ability:1
Special Ability:2
(Distribute five points through these categories. You gain an additional two points every level up.)
Non-Combat Abilities:
Medicine
Computer Skills
Stealth
Speech 3
Mechanics 2

Character Misc Info: He is pretty outgoing, happy person but when fighting he only cares about protecting his family and others. He will stop at nothing to protect someone he loves. He was dropped off at an orphanage at 3 months, the orphanage was destroid when he was 13 so he has been living by himself on the streets for 4 years so he knows how to take care of himself

Once we get at least one but preferably two or three players, we can begin. Others can join later, though; some people who were not in the Complex have survived, and they are welcome to join the party. If there are any questions, feel free to ask.

This is kinda what he looks like but anime style
http://tjragan.files.wordpress.com/2008/10/anime-boy.jpg

-- Edited by hafenater on Wednesday 29th of September 2010 07:30:03 PM

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you pretty much copied me.


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shantz is probably gonna sigh up in less than 10 minutes from this post

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Alrighty, let's see here....

We have enough people that it's going to be limited to one character per person. Anyone with more than one character, pick which would you'd like to play as.

@Shane Davids: Completely invisibility with no limits is over-powered. I can either come up with limits for you, or you can revise your power slightly.

Oh, also, a few things:

@Jenny: No, your parents didn't leave the Complex. If they did, they'd be dead. No one has left the Complex before.

@Dawn: There aren't streets in the Complex. It's organized into Wards of a thousand members each, as stated in the introduction. Underage children without parents would have been immediately assigned by the Council to a family.

@Shane: A little bit of background on your character would be nice.

@Brock: Looks good; no complaints. Have a cookie.

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First name: Shane
Last name: Davids
Gender: Male
Age: 18
Appearance: Tall, Goth, wears black all the time.
Gun Choice: Armalite AR 50 (high powered sniper rifle.)
Melee weapon: Ka-bar knife
Special Ability: Invisibility. He can sorta fade into the wall. This is limited, and can only work when he is in need of it.
Gun Skill: 1
Melee skill: 2
Special Ability: 3
Non combat abilities:
medicine 0
computer skills 0
stealth 5
speech 0
mechanics 0
misc. info He is a boy who is rather quiet. he really likes honesty and people who will not let him fail. He is kinda honest himself, he cares mostly about others.


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j wrote:


First name: Shane
Last name: Davids
Gender: Male
Age: 18
Appearance: Tall, Goth, wears black all the time.
Gun Choice: Armalite AR 50 (high powered sniper rifle.)
Melee weapon: Ka-bar knife
Special Ability: Invisibility. He can sorta fade into the wall. This is limited, and can only work when he is in need of it.
Gun Skill: 1
Melee skill: 2
Special Ability: 3
Non combat abilities:
medicine 0
computer skills 0
stealth 5
speech 0
mechanics 0
misc. info He is a boy who is rather quiet. he really likes honesty and people who will not let him fail. He is kinda honest himself, he cares mostly about others.



Only working when he needs it isn't really much of a limit. I mean, if he doesn't need it, not being able to use it is hardly a problem, is it? How about this: he can't turn completely invisible, but can become transparent; unless someone is looking closely, they probably won't be able to see him.

 



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thats what i meant.

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in exchange, he can do it at will

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Double post, double post. Does whatever a double post does. There's an edit button for a reason.

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well mines restricted

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aw dang! missed out on some roleplay, i love roleplay. :C

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nice. you can still join.

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VEE2 wrote:

aw dang! missed out on some roleplay, i love roleplay. :C




It's not too late; you can still join since we just started. We'll just pretend you were with them the whole time.

 

@Shane: I just realized that your combat ability points add up to 6, not five. You're going to have to subtract one somewhere.



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First name:KiKi
Last name: dnulpsa
Gender: female
Age: 14
Appearance: white blonde hair that goes down to her shoulders. She appears cute but is pretty tough.
Gun Choice: likes big guns, but cant always carry um around.She has a pistol and gets her hands on a big gun whenevah she canz.
Melee weapon:
Special Ability: she can jump real high
Gun Skill: 2
Melee skill: 2
Special Ability:1
Non combat abilities
medicine:0
computer skills :2
stealth:0
speech :3
mechanics 0
misc. she's a cute clumsy girl who likes to feel important. She wants to help in every battle. She's quite clever, she can help find solutions to mysterious things quite fast. She likes the colors white and black best, and wears them when ever she can, although shes not goth or emo or anything. Shes a good fighter but has alot of weaknesses, like being impatient, being easily distracted, and the fact she thinks your a good guy no matter what if you compliment her hair.



-- Edited by VEE2 on Wednesday 13th of October 2010 07:02:40 PM

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First name: Shane
Last name: Davids
Gender: Male
Age: 18
Appearance: Tall, Goth, wears black all the time.
Gun Choice: Armalite AR 50 (high powered sniper rifle.)
Melee weapon: Ka-bar knife
Special Ability: Invisibility. He can sorta fade into the wall. This is limited, and can only work when he is in need of it.
Gun Skill: 2
Melee skill: 2
Special Ability: 1
Non combat abilities:
medicine 0
computer skills 0
stealth 5
speech 0
mechanics 0
misc. info He is a boy who is rather quiet. he really likes honesty and people who will not let him fail. He is kinda honest himself, he cares mostly about others.


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*Thumbs up*

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Yay ben likes me I feel so special

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First Name:  Zane
Last Name:  Trecker
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Appearance:
Zane Trecker.jpg
Gun Choice:  fn scar pmag
Melee Weapon: special recon tactical knife
Ability: speed and strength
Gun Ability: burns anyone who touches it but Zane. (not severly just painfully)
Melee Ability: blade is sharp enough to cut through almost anything
Special Ability: super reflex level
Non-Combat Abilities: mind reading
Medicine: herbs
Computer Skills: Hacking I guess
Stealth: able to move through shadows without being seen
Speech: soft and gentle (around friends), harsh and commanding (during combat)
Mechanics: can build and modify almost any weapon

Character Misc Info:Zane was three when his parents were killed in a gunfire and his uncle took him in. Zane was five when his uncle became a military commander and learned a great deal of combat from him. Zane ran away at age 13 after his uncle died of sickness and lived on his own in the wilderness. He took two weapon when he left and those were the Special Recon Tactical blade and the FN SCAR PMAG. He is now sixteen and awaits the adventure of his future.



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sorry my mistake
Gun Ability:2
Melee Ability:1
Special Ability:2

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Woah there mate. Your character has a few issues.

1. Non-combat skills are for allocating points, not for additional abilities.
2. You only get one ability; you seen to have chosen a few more than that.
3. Your character background doesn't fit in with the story; you can't live in the wilderness and the Complex at the same time.

Fix those and you'll be good to join.

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Gun ability:1
melee ability:1
special ability:2
non combat ability:1

okay. He ran away to the complex instead of wilderness.

Ability: speed


Is this good?

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Yes no and yes. The Complex has been locked for more than fifty years; no one has gone in or out. As I said regarding Dawn, underage children without parents would have been immediately assigned by the Council to a family. Thus, if you're playing as a character who isn't an adult, they've lived with a family their entire life, as that's the way things work in the Complex. Apart from that, those abilities look good. Can you elaborate a bit on your special power? "Speed" is a little vague.


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isn't 16 an adult?

ability:can befudle peoples minds.


I think i spelled befudle wrong.

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Nope, 18 is an adult, except for some cases in which it's 21. That ability is acceptable. It's spelled befuddle.

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Okay.... His dad dies, he lives with his uncle for an amount of time learning military stuff while his mom works and tries to keep their money up. After his uncle dies he goes back to live with his mom.




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hello still here?

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This is Shanes photo

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Shane has a pierced lip!!!!

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